Disgusting.
The whole idea and concept (Hero guy avenging his family from a delictive organisation) is not original at all. Its too wasted man. Sincerely I think you stole the plot from a low budget film.
Second, the drawings were too rude, too... raw! I mean... There was no REAL effort there (if there was, you must practice more) The faces, movements and details were too gross. Maybe a quick reading of anatomy and understanding normal human proportions may help you drawing "believable-looking" characters.
And its very annoying to see the way you use "arial 12, bold" text that you've only rotated to fit in several places, it didnt look right even. (ie. the Welcome Pad, the tomb). And for God's sake, you dont have to label every single room in your movies, i mean "WC", "baby's room" Please!! We're not in Sesame Street!!
Ok, You spent time in this and 6 minutes is a decent amount of work, thats why i gave only one point. But believe me, you must put some effort in your work.