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Congratulations

I think this is one of the few submissions in NG that has kept my interest and has astonished myself for real. Even though the time traveling plot isn't new at all, you've given it a whole different perspective, always with new elements and "historical" situations.

Congratulations.

A good story, makes all your work shine by itself.

Good begining... WORST Ending

Even though the whole story - the girl leaving the guy who hits her -isn't original at all, it could have an interesting ending here. BUT it all started to srew up when the plane started to fail.
That's an incredibly stupid teenage fantasy wich is high-lighted when the plane crashes in that "never-ending" abyss and making the guy's brain split over the rocks.

Your graphics were generally O.K. /(Not good, they could be worse) but the graphics themselves arent important. Really... a good story makes a great animation, no matter your drawing ability.

Disgusting.

The whole idea and concept (Hero guy avenging his family from a delictive organisation) is not original at all. Its too wasted man. Sincerely I think you stole the plot from a low budget film.

Second, the drawings were too rude, too... raw! I mean... There was no REAL effort there (if there was, you must practice more) The faces, movements and details were too gross. Maybe a quick reading of anatomy and understanding normal human proportions may help you drawing "believable-looking" characters.

And its very annoying to see the way you use "arial 12, bold" text that you've only rotated to fit in several places, it didnt look right even. (ie. the Welcome Pad, the tomb). And for God's sake, you dont have to label every single room in your movies, i mean "WC", "baby's room" Please!! We're not in Sesame Street!!

Ok, You spent time in this and 6 minutes is a decent amount of work, thats why i gave only one point. But believe me, you must put some effort in your work.

Ok, va bene

Ok, was a nice work... Excepto for the sound.... it was not smooth at all, and your pronunciation (I mean, dicción) was not as good as it should be. Also... There was no HUMOR at all, you MUST fix that, I really was bored during your movie.

I may understand that English may be a little difficult for you... But I cannot forgive you to have TERRIBLE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR mistakes in YOUR OWN "idioma". I mean... Come on!! That its not professional.

And thanks, its been a long since I watched a "non-english" work here in NG. Keep on working

Oh man, U are fuckn sick.

Usually racial jokes often make me get upset. But in this case, the "surprise factor" really made me laugh. Try not offending anybody next time, ok? Good job.

NewEvolution responds:

Heh, see? That's the spirit! It's the compound effect of the shock of the music, the sudden switch ending, and the Nazi attack that makes it so crazy-like.

Besides...muffins ARE for eating...

Psychotically charming

Animation could be better, but the story itself kept my attention all the time.

FLASH PORTAL

*sighs* - Flash Portal guy... Why did you submit this?

A Familiar Style

Ok, let's begin.

Firstly, I think that this movie was quite short for the quality you are giving (this means this is not an absolute piece of crap), therefore, I'd really appreciate if you make further episodes a little bit longer.

In the other hand, the whole concept and style reminds me a bastard version of Spumco (Remember Ren & Stimpy?). But still being an exact copy of John K. work... I Liked it.

Keep with the good work.

Nice intro... Unexpected punchline

Kool... I think that kind of shit should have happened to Batman someday. Nice movie indeed. (Except for the preloader; it blows off the serious part of the movie just too way before its needed)

Nice Job, va bene.

You broke it, you pay it.

Age 39, Male

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